Sick Sentences

Sick Sentences- The plane went through the sky. It was cloudy. The wind blew.

Improved Sentences-Gliding slowly, the plane soared through all the fluffy white clouds hitting it on its journey. The wind blew gracefully creating a light breeze.

These are the sick sentences that I improved. I really enjoyed being able to make these sentences come to life. A challenge I faced was trying not to overuse some words. My tip would be to keep on adding adjectives/adverbs when needed.

                                 Hope you enjoy!