Ginormous, dark red buildings surrounded us as we gazed upon the landscape. Smoke floated up from the chimneys and filled the sky with its huge grey clouds. They felt there feet sink into the freezing white snow as they felt a tiny tingle.
This is my tundra town writing. I hope you enjoy!
Hi Tasfia. I liked the way how you wrote the story like and actually chapter book. My favorite part was the second sentence because you changed the smoke into clouds. Check my blog: https://odsziw.blogspot.com/ Blog you later, Tasfia...
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Hi Ivan,
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my blog. It's nice to know you enjoyed it. Have you ever written a story like this before?
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Tasfia